Gary responded with the sketch above, and additional commentary as follows:

"I attach a low resolution sketch of my interpretation of your ideas in the previous feedback. I have manipulated the flight path a bit - they were evading a fighter - so we can see Mailly burning in the background, and the moon (which at 0040 was on a bearing of 221˚ and altitude of 40˚). There's Bill (is there a photo of him at that age?) and the feathered prop and the fires, etc., based on his description".